Second opinions sought (please) for my website (redone) Thank you.

Hi, really more of what Adam is saying. There's just too much text on the landing page. Don't be worried about people not navigating past the landing page. They're less likely to explore your site having being assaulted with thousands of words of text as soon as they arrive. You basically have 3 pages worth of info on the homepage so break it down into additional pages and then use images and spacing to break it up.

I'd look at finding a new font as well, something that fits the style of the site.

I am not a designer, but here are my thoughts: In my browser (Chrome), the font of the "LIFE COACHES" tag line font could use some smoothing.
Also, I think it would look better if the eyes of the people in the pictures more or less lined up with each other. Right now the head of the person on the far right is too high. Hope this helps!

I think you could really do with separating some of the content out - perhaps using blocks of colour to separate it out. When I design websites I also look at the typography first, choosing what style I'm going to make my H1, H2.. etc tags - Not only does this help style the rest of the page but it encourages you to put more thought into the typography, something that I think should be done here if the text is to be made more clear (Perhaps try messing around with line and letter spacing in your css to achieve higher readability.

To sum it up, really the content probably needs more separation using colour, less text, more readable typography - and maybe make some incorporation of shape into the page (ie, style the sections you make into different shapes, see example

Hope that helps! -Sam

Change the <title> tag in the head from Home to anything else--<title>Coaching Line | Life Coaches</title> or something similar. Also, consider some kind of favicon.